The waves of Waipu Cove Beach devour its surfing predators, swallowing them whole in one big CRASH!
You will be in with the lucky leprechauns to survive the big ones.
The sand will sink within the tiniest gaps of your toes, ready to suck your feet down underneath.
The cold water will send a shiver up your spine.
It will burn your eyes with red electric like shots (bloodshot) warning you about what lies ahead in the deep.
The mystic shadowy caves will sink up to your knees with dirty H2O flowing through your shoes, and the glow worms dripping oozy slime.
The damp walls look like they're closing in and are going to crush you flat.
Back in the campground a tent, two! Four! Loads of campers playing by their boiling, plastic tents, hot in the sun.
The smell is of 100 strips of bacon drifting through the morning sky, and the smell of nature swaying with the easy breeze.
The air tastes minty fresh with a hit of my afternoon sausage still in my mouth. :)
The birds lovely chirp Is enough to send everyone drifting to sleep
OMG! Isaac, this is a fabulous piece of writing! Keep it up buddy, you'll be famous someday.....
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DeleteYes, fabulous descriptions. You use a lot of sensory language that makes your writing come alive.
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