Tuesday 6 September 2016

100 wor

prompt:And I thought, “well what a start”

As I started the day, I felt horrible. I went to the mr whippy parked outside of our house in the car park, and I asked for the usual, a triple scoop choco nut cracker kinder rainbow sour chilly flake choc burst, with a cherry on top. I reached out to grab it, when I suddenly slipped up over a kids lolly pop he left a couple weeks ago. I dropped my Ice-cream on to my head, and the lollipop kid burst out laughing while taking a photo screening, “UNICORN!” And I thought, “well what a start.”

5 comments:

  1. I like the ice cream flavour, however, it needed commas because it was a long list of ingredients.
    Secondly, how did the lollipop kid burst out laughing if he left the lollipop there a couple of weeks ago??

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  2. I like the ice cream flavour, however, it needed commas because it was a long list of ingredients.
    Secondly, how did the lollipop kid burst out laughing if he left the lollipop there a couple of weeks ago??

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  3. Great story idea .. You used great wow words.

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  4. I love eating ice cream and I hate dropping it.

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