DOORS WRITING

You see a door. Yes , another door. “This door contains valuable items, such as, a golden staff, flame boots, and a bunch of cobwebs” a voice said from the shadows, “one worthy will take all the items” You ask the voice if you were worthy, “we shall see…” As he said that, you fell, and everything went slow mo. You were falling for 100 years, until, you saw the golden staff. You tried to reach it, but you were to slow, you are still falling. 100 years later, you see the flame boots, you reached… and got it! You put the flame boots on, and heard the same voice you heard 200 years ago, “you are worthy” the voice says, “you shall stop falling now.” You finally stop falling. A big thump, and you are on the ground you walk around but, you get set on fire by the flame, until you burn to death. If your teacher tried to explain the crazy slow mo fall, he/she would say it is science, but believe me, it's just plain... MAGIC.

That was summer

                            That was summer

Remember, Freezing, drippy chocolate Ice cream melting in my warm hands, too cold to hold.

Remember, The nice hot sun making everything in front of me blurry as a man with no glasses.

                               That was summer

Remember, Sizzling BBQ with delicious, morning bacon and exploded, yolky eggs getting fried.

Remember, the ripe strawberries waiting in the green garden ready to be picked out of their ihome.

Remember, the sunny hot beach with the freezing waves washing up on to the sandy shore.

Remember, the loud annoying cicadas chirping after every ‘awkward silence’.

That was summer.

                By Isaac

The shipwreck, The amazing adventures of Thomas 2

The shipwreck

AS OUR HEROES GO OUT IN A DINGY THE weird MAN FORGETS WHERE HE WAS GOING…

“Where are you going!?” said Thomas

“umm, I forgot.  I don't know the seven seas as well as I used to me lad.        All I know is that there is a sea monster guarding a treasure chest-”

“You mean you're a pirate!”

“Of course, just like you.”

I am no pirate!” Thomas said shoving the pirate overboard.

What Thomas did not think about is who was paddling…

“What will I do!” Said Thomas.

“I know!”, but it was to late, he crashed into a rock.

As Thomas woke up, he was on a sandy beach.  “How? Where? Waaa?”

Thomas stood up and walked around a little bit.  Where am I? Thomas thought to himself, can I get home?  Nothing.  So he said it again, this time aloud, “can I get home?“

“Yes, if you build a boat” Thomas was taken by surprise, that, someone responded.  “My name is, well, I don't have a name, but you can call me Atlantis.” Said Atlantis.  So the two of them ran along the sandy beach.

Soon they were at a palm tree,  “this is my home.” Said Atlantis

“Not much” said Thomas

“It's my only shelter, my only source of coconuts and my only leaf blanket” said Atlantis.  “Im stranded.”

At that moment Thomas started flying and gliding. “I can fly! I know I can fly back home!”

“You are the chosen one” said Atlantis

“YAY!” said Thomas

“Let's go” said Thomas .    5     4     3     2     1     BLAST OF!

we're going on a Mission  let's start the countdown 54321 we ARE going on a trip   IN OUR favourite rocket ship zooming through the sky. Little Einsteins!!!

The end

my free writing: The amazing adventures of Thomas

The amazing adventures of Thomas

“Hurry up you will be late for school!” I heard my mum shout.

“Coming” I said blocking my ears.

I slowly flopped my blankets off my bed, looked at my alarm clock and.... “Oh no It’s 9:00!” I ran outside with no breakfast, no bag, still in my pj’s to the school grounds.

“Hello, Thomas” my teacher said calmly, “you're….., late, you know what that means……”

“detention” I said sadly.

I knew walking to detention was shameful, but by myself, I could just go in the opposite direction.  So I walked to the office and about 5 meters away, I ditched detention.

I ran out of the school grounds, not looking where I was going.  I stopped, I didn't mean to stop, but I did.  At that moment, I felt a slight choking tug on my collar.  It was the school bully, holding me up by the collar.

The school bully was a tall, fat kid ready to punch anyone who is nearby.  He always wore a black beanie and a dark green top with a skull on it.  His name was a bad name, a terrifying horrible name.  It was Jeff.

I was super scared, but he went calm, and shyly said “hi”.  “Uuuuhhhhh, hi” I said back ”are you trying to escape school too?”

“Yes” he said back to me.  We both ran out of school as fast as we could.  until Jeff stopped, I didn’t know he stopped, then a moment later I was lost.

I was under water.  I tried swimming  to the top, at the top, I saw a man, the man was in a dingy, fishing. “A little help” I said.

“How can I trust you” he said

“because  you are kind…?”

“catch the rope me lad” the strange man said

“Okay, but trust me, I won’t hurt you”

THIS STORY WILL CONTINUE IN THE NEXT ONE: THE SHIPWRECK

garden to table poem

Slicing, dicing, chopping

weeping over onion chops!

Seeds need sunlight

and water

harvest plants

when they’re ready

or you will be in for a nasty surprise!

Eating your veggies

would be quite nice

don’t leave them for the ants

Nomnomnomnomnom!!!!!!

Isaac Grieve loves to eat

munching, crunching ,eating.

my swimming poem

The sound of kids swimming

makes me feel happy

the blue clear water makes you able to

see a whale of a sight!

you have to hold your breath!

jumping off the side

makes you feel scared

but when your feet are off the ground

you feel like you are flying!

ka splash!

you might want to go in the  kiddie pool first

because you will have an awesome underwater adventure!

pack a clean pair of swimming togs

because you will poop your pants

if you see a shark!